There are a couple scenarios to discuss.
a) You get no requests based on your query.
b) You get requests on your query but always a pass.
Use your instincts. If you are getting some quality feedback, but no offers or continuing requests but no offer, try to digest.
a) Either your premise is poor, the quality of writing is poor, you aren’t personalizing your query (To Whom it May Concern) and thus aren’t connecting with agents, OR your manuscript might be great but your query isn’t explaining it properly to get warranted attention.
b) If you are getting form rejections on your material then agents probably don’t have time to breakdown what needs work. If you are getting personalized rejections with tips and information for improvement then you are on the right track.
There are many behind the scenes situations that writers can read too much into: how long an agent takes to get back etc. But, overall, you’ll know if you are connecting. Take your feedback and work with it. One agent might say the pace needs work and another might say pace is great, but dialogue isn’t authentic. While these seem like contradicting pieces of advice what this say to me is: agents are reading it, they want to connect with it, but sadly aren’t. So think about what’s holding them back.
Agents want good writing to find good representation and thus a good publisher. But, it might not be right for us.
Alternatively, if you are stuck in form rejection land there is nothing to do but push on with a good, well executed, hook based query letter and faith in your work.
Time to retire?
- When you’re ready to self publish.
- When you’ve stopped taking care in personally addressing query letters and doing appropriate research.
- When you’ve gotten to the end of the list of your ‘desirable’ agents and publishers–don’t sign a contract that you’re not happy with.
- Retire an old query and write a new one. Keep it fresh for you and you’ll project that freshness to agents.
- When it’s your first query and your first manuscript and it’s not getting any bites or feedback. Chalk it up to a learning experience and get writing your next novel. Don’t waste time in the past, think about your writing future.
Q: Have you ever had to retire a query? What were the circumstances?