What ‘too quiet’ means to me:
- It can be very well written but it might fall into the ‘forgettable’ category
- It’s a ‘good’ book, but it’s not ‘great’
- The plot does not have high enough stakes
- Agents and editors don’t think it will make a big enough splash in the marketplace in such a competitive environment
- In a marketplace that is looking for big books with flashy hooks, quiet books won’t stand out on editors’ own lists
- This can be the case of novels that aren’t bringing anything new to the table in terms of premise, plot, or characters and their relationships
- ‘Too quiet’ books are often low concept, contemporary or literary novels that aren’t holding the interest of readers, which could be for many reasons
Agents and editors might use this phrase as an empty catch phrase in rejections, and it’s hard to know exactly how they each personally describe ‘too quiet’, but you don’t want an agent or editor that doesn’t think your book can stand out. Overall, it means the agent or editor isn’t connecting with your novel.
How can you avoid the ‘too quiet’ trap?
- Even literary fiction need a strong and compelling plot
- You need to be able to pitch your book with a hook that entices readers. If you don’t have a hook, you don’t have a marketable project.
- Ask yourself if you are crafting some creative writing or a novel to be published and read by the masses
- Are your stakes high enough?
Q: What does ‘too quiet’ mean to you?